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Pyramid of Despair

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 5:41 pm
by Tawnos76
I now have the second draft done of my module.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/wlglqd7cf ... espair.pdf

Please let me know what you think.

2nd draft up

Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 7:30 am
by Mira
I like it :) Should take the players quite some time to get through it if they manage to survive it. Mostly looks like a few spelling errors and formating issues would clean it up to a more 'professional' quality.

Mira (Things work better if you plug them in)

Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:05 am
by Tawnos76
I will fix those errors and try to make sure the formatting is correct. Always a few things you miss in a first draft.

My players had survived but I had sent them down their with at least 2 raise scrolls with the cleric and they did get used.

Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 12:36 pm
by Varl
Cool adventure Tawnos! Thanks. The Dwarf Crusher is going to be fun.

Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:37 am
by Halaster Blackcloak
Tawnos, I haven't had a chance to read it all through, but just skimming it, it screams "kick ass"! :D

Did you want me to upload it to the BIP downloads page? Does that sentence even make any sense? :?

Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:53 pm
by Tawnos76
You can put it on the downloads page for everyone.

If anyone wants to draw up a cover art for it I will add that to the PDF as well.

Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:15 pm
by Tawnos76
I added some cover art to pdf.
I used the Back in Print scroll if that is OK

http://www.mediafire.com/file/jwyci0ar1 ... espair.pdf

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2018 10:49 pm
by Halaster Blackcloak
Well I was finally able to add this to the downloads page! Good god we're behind the times!